Inevitable
A mourning doves beakis threaded with vine;and a girl stands clingingto thoughts of the bird --its song, its half-woven nest.Suddenly, she steps back watching her shadowed skirts fall between ferns...
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"Her young bones imported from Guillen,city of rice and moonlight."Wendy, A sensational close!I was unprepared for that ending.sarah
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I also was unprepared for the ending. It is rather mysterious wendy, one to make you thinlkMaggie
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Wendy,This poem truly has layers to it...and it left me with the feeling that there's even more to the subject's story than what was stated. There's this sense of history, and a larger outside context...
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"city of rice and moonlight"--such a magical ring to it!I agree with Jean, a poem both sad and mysterious. The etchings on the wrist resonate with me as bondage-bracelets or the wounds of attempted...
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Some exceptional wording here. The line about the boss is unique in a way. Thanks.Tom
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Dear Maggie, Sarah, Jean, Jasmine, MM, Tom, Jean,Thank you all so much for commenting on this poem. I deeply appreciate your time and thoughtful insightl I really helps me to focus and stay...
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JaredThanks so much for stopping by to read and comment on this poem. I deeply appreciate it.my bestWendy
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Gwen:As I wander through the wondersof the girl {in your poem}sharing energies with the universal mind,I wonder if I understandwhat the girl does and doesn't understand;but that is the beauty of...
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Grothanks so much for sharing your insight and thoughts on this poem. The idea of this piece is to create a character that wonders and also cues the observer/reader to wonder and wander down those...
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